Book Review: The Memory Police by Yoko Ogawa by A.M. Molloy

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This was for sure an interesting book to read. The concept, the unique storytelling, was gripping from start to finish. Apologies if this review is all over the place. I have many thoughts on the book haha.

In this book, we have an unknown narrator, of which I named "Megui" after a friend of mine. We don't get much description of her other than she's a female, occasionally wears makeup, and has longish hair. But that doesn't take away from the story. In this way, it helps us become "Megui" and puts us in her shoes.

The Memory Police by Yoko Ogawa

The Memory Police by Yoko Ogawa

The whole idea that things "disappear" is very interesting. When the Memory Police make something "disappeared" (of which we never find out why they do this other than to be dicks I guess because some of the things they deem useless are not), things aren't actually gone. The objects still exist. People just simply lose all memory associated with them and then get rid of the physical objects. what's interesting, however, is how some people don't forget. They live remembering everything that was "disappeared". It's never explained why some people are like this but it all adds to the mystery.

Like, 90% of the characters don't have names, for example, our MC. I had a theory that at one point the Memory Police decided names were useless so they make them disappear. However, that can't be the case as there are like 3 people who do have names, one being the MC's editor, R. (A letter still counts as a name haha).

I also enjoyed the story within a story. It paralleled with the main story so perfectly. "Megui" is a novelist, and we get to see snippets of her work throughout the book. It's unfortunate for her that novels "disappear" at some point, but somehow at the end, she manages to finish her story, and it was every bit as sad as the actual ending for the book.

The ending itself was so sad. No real conclusion. It was abrupt, like the loss of memory of things that disappeared. She just kinda... died. I thought maybe "Megui" would figure out a way to remember things, or figure why/how the Memory Police make people forget things, but she didn't. She just lived her life until she forgot about her entire self.

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Yoko Ogawa

As a side note, I did notice a few inconsistencies. One of them being on things that had already disappeared. Like, photos disappear at one point, but there is a time when "Megui" and the old man are being ID checked by the Memory Police. "Megui" mentions that the police are checking the identification that has photographs on them, but how does that work if they had disappeared in an earlier scene? Like, they burn everything that has an association to do with the thing that disappeared.

That being said, while I didn't particularly like how it ended, I'm not mad at the book. I actually really enjoyed it. It was an easy and fast read and I highly recommend it.

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Book Review: Prep by Curtis Sittenfeld by A.M. Molloy

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This is a confusing book to rate, but I'll do my best to explain why.

The book itself has no real plot and reads kinda like a memoir. It's literally just a girl going through high school. I've nothing against this type of storytelling, if it’s well done, and this book does it well. The writing is the best part of this book, as well as fairly realistic portrayals of kids going through life in high school, (though I can't comment on the boarding school part as I've never been to one).

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A New York Times bestseller.

However, the main character Lee Fiora can be a bit insufferable at times. She doesn't really grow as a character. She's constantly judging other people and her depressive nature is a bit of a downer to read. She gets mad over petty things and seems to think she knows most everything better than everyone else. Not always, but that's the sense I got anyway. I would have LOVED to read the story from Martha's (her best friend and roommate) perspective. I love Martha as a character.

Yet, despite Lee's desputable persinatliy, I did enjoy the book. Mostly because of the writing. I loved the writign syle.

If you want action or character driven plot, or a plot in general, this isn't the book for you. But if you want a nice little read to pass the time with a book that was well written, give this a read.

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Book Review: The Guardian by A.T. Duguay by A.M. Molloy

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I have the pleasure of actually knowing the author personally. Duguay and I go way back to high school, and though we haven't really spoken to each other for nearly 15 years (wow that makes me feel old haha), we recently re-connected through our love of writing.

Now, onto his novel. For a first-time author, this book was very well written and the formatting was gorgeous. (He did the formatting and cover design himself and it turned out dope!) Duguay was able to do excellent world-building without making it a big info dump. I was constantly excited to learn more about Gauthak's world (and the world around him). It's obvious there is still plenty to learn, but knowing this is the first in the series definitely helps. As it stands, the story itself is a good stand-alone in terms of world-building and character development.

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Before I gush about all the good things about this book, there were only a few "negative" things I should mention. I wouldn't even call them negatives. More like nitpicking based on my own personal preference.

For starters, I loved all the names of the main characters, Gauthak, Lauranna, and the names of the Northmen. But it seemed as though if the character didn't have a big role to play, their names were taken from our world and "made to look fantasy". Names like Samanda, Josiph, Sorcha, for example. Nothing wrong with that. Again, it's me being nitpicky.

Second, I found it odd that after each part, (the book is divided into three parts), the chapter titles would reset back to one. This may be a common fantasy practice that I'm unaware of, but from the books I've read that were divided into parts (my unpublished one included), the chapters never reset to one.

The story did drag--only a little!!--a bit at the start of part three, but did pick up again. But, can't have action all the time!

Last, sometimes the character's voices sounded more modern than I feel they should. (I just imaged in the setting they're in to sound all Game of Thrones like, and they totally don't have to, but yeah). Sometimes they sounded like they were in the fantasy setting they were in while other times a few modern sounded phrases seemed to pop through. At least, that's how it felt to me.

Anywho, as I said, nitpicky stuff. All very minor.

Now, onto the good stuff.

First off, LOVE Gauthak. He's a well-written character and has a great history (albeit sad) and a very interesting culture to learn about. I love how it isn't insta-love between him and Lauranna and it was sweet to Gauthak slowly get smitten with her.

I loved all the Northman, but I'm sad about how some of their stories had ended. They are a strong group of characters and the camaraderie between them and the rest of the cast felt very realistic.

Faron is easily one of my favourite characters aside from Guathak. He's the magic user in this world and I love his sarcastic yet hard truth-telling attitude. Plus the way Duguay wrote how Faron performed magic was pretty cool. Can't wait to learn more about him and the magic system of this series.

All in all, a solid good book. Great read. For a first-time author, Duguay should be proud of what he's accomplished. Here's hoping book two comes out soon!

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Book Review: You by Caroline Kepnes by A.M. Molloy

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Wow, where do I begin with this one?

First off, hats off to Kepnes for writing an engaging main character. Kepnes really dives into the mind of a serial stalker/killer. It's almost scary how much she makes Joe seem rational in all his decisions. I mean, Joe straight out murders anyone who gets in his way--and has even done it before!), yet somehow the way it's all written it seems... justified. I don't like how that made me feel as a person but I love how it made me feel as a reader. It was interesting to see the world the way a serial stalker/killer like Joe does.

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Second, I want to praise Kepnes for her writing style. It was such a unique way of writing. Yes, plenty of people write in the first person, but this was handled much differently. The style of how Joe speaks, always referring to his love interest (obsession) as "you" was a bold choice. Not many authors I know can pull off using the same word repeatedly so much that it doesn't come off as annoying and overused.

Third, Kepnes has you on the edge of your seat the entire book as you wait to see if Joe will be caught during his many, many, illegal activities. The way this book played out, however, makes me think he's the luckiest bastard in the world to have gotten away with so much.

I will say, however, some of the language Joe uses, (cunt, pussy, dick, f***, ext) was a little jarring. However, it fits Joe's character perfectly. It may have felt a bit vulgar, but I believe that was Kepne's intention, and it worked.

Solid read. Now to read the sequels!

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Book Review: Every Single Lie by Rachel Vincent by A.M. Molloy

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Wow, just wow. There is a reason Rachel Vincent is an auto-buy every time she releases a new book.

Not gonna lie, just by reading the description alone, I probably wouldn't have bought it if it wasn't by Rachel Vincent. It didn't sound like my type of book. But man was this ever a good read. Vincent had me hooked from chapter 1. With great characters and an extremely well-researched book.

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Every Single Lie by Rachel Vincent

I sorta figured out who the mother was a little bit before Beckett did (and I'm proud of that as I don't usually figure things out before the characters do), but that didn't take away from the shock value.

The issues this book tackles are very deep and very real. Something not many people talk about but should. And it was handled so well. Not to mention the writing is--as always--spot on.

If you think this book isn't for you, I'd still suggest giving it a gander. I didn't think it was a story I'd like but it turned out to be one of the best reads this year. You may even learn a thing or two, as I did!

Anyway, 10/10, would HIGHLY recommend.

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The Savior's Sister by Jenna Moreci by A.M. Molloy

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Welcome back to my blog! It’s been a while, hasn’t it? While I’ve sadly been a bit inactive here, I have been active only on other social media. So! I suggest you check them out (links on the website) if you wanna keep up to date.

I’ve decided that for my first post of 2020 (wow, took me so long to make a blog post, whoops), I’m going to promote another author that I love and adore. Jenna Moreci is the bestselling author of The Savior's Champion and Eve The Awakening. She is also a YouTube blogger and full-time Cyborg Queen.

To tell you a bit about The Savior’s Champion, I will let Jenna tell you herself:

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Now that I’ve piqued your interest, Jenna has written a companion novel, The Savior’s Sister.

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And finally, today the book trailer for The Savior’s Sister dropped and it is beautiful.

As a fellow writer, I feel that it’s important to share the works of other authors. I’ve read the first book and it was an amazing adventure. I highly recommend. And with the release of The Savior’s Sister coming in September, I would again recommend checking it out and pre-order it when it becomes available.

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If you haven’t read The Savior’s Champion, check out Jenna Moreci’s links below to get started!

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The Final Fight: War Of The Gods (Pt. 3 Reborn) by A.M. Molloy

STORY NOTE:

This story was originally written for a school paper for a gaming interactive storytelling class (which also had a word limit hence the fast pace of the story).  

            I decided to do the Hero's Journey, but with a twist. Instead of the 'hero', I decided to have the villain go on the journey to see if I could go on the 'heroes journey' but with evil intent. It's no secret Zemir is the 'bad guy' in this story while the god of justice, Nah'Zhul, is the hero we would normally play in a game. Turns out, the formula works just as well for villains as it does for heroes. 
            As a side note, this was my first time writing a fantasy story. For the dialogue I tried to imitate speech patterns from shows such as Spartacus and Game of Thrones. I pray it not too confusing.
            That being said, I hope you enjoy the final part of The Final Fight. In cased you missed it, don’t forget to check part 1 Into Darkness and part 2 Age of Gods for a refresher on the beginning and middle of the story. 

PS: This isn’t my usual writing style and I’ve improved vastly as a writer since I wrote this in 2016. This is merely a fun thing to share.


 

PART TWO: 

                        Age of Gods

Zemir had everything where he wanted. With his wife by his side, he was ready to kill the High Gods while they slept. Yet before he could strike the lethal blow, the ground on which he stood shook and dust fell from the ceiling. He stumbled, nearly falling to the ground. After the room settled, Zemir conjured a sphere of black flames and cast it towards his enemies.

            A white, shielding, light appeared and absorbed the flames. Standing in front of the High Gods was Nah'Zhul.

            "Na—Nah'Zhul!" Zemir exclaimed in disbelief. "You had perished! How is this possible?"

            Nah'Zhul pointed his sword toward Zemir. "Kidaha gave me her life and in turn all of her power. Her sacrifice will allow me to put an end to this and bring justice upon you."

            "Impossible," Mehélia gasped. "Kidaha was the heart of the planet. Without her, Spira would be destroyed and we'd all have lost our divinity."

            "Correct you are, Lady Mehélia," said Nah'Zhul. He placed a hand over his chest with sorrow. "But her sacrifice would not be in vain. She would never allow her people to die as Zemir has. No, my lady, I am now the heart of the planet."

            "Let me end this now," said Zemir. "I care not for you Lord Nah'Zhul. I will kill you and steal your heart in the process. I will be reborn a High God with the heart of the plant and reign over all!"

            "You fool. You cannot win now," boasted Nah'Zhul. 

            Calling forth the magic of old, Nah'Zhul struck down Zemir from where he stood with a radiant beam of magical light. Zemir's flesh burned and withered and he fell to the ground with immense pain. As his body refused to move out of agony, Zemir watched as Nah'Zhul used his combined powers of himself of the fallen Kidaha to awaken the three High Gods.

            With Shinoda, Ouganda, and Shiesta awakened, their wondrous fury could be felt by mortals and gods alike. Unleashing their might of creation, Shinoda reversed the damage Zemir had caused. He brought back all those who had died and returned the land to normal, returning time to before they were poisoned. Shinoda spoke words of a long forgotten language and erased the memories of pain and death among his people.

            When all had been restored, Zemir stood alone with those he despised. The punishment was his alone to bare, yet he knew he deserved none of it. He had created his perfect world and it was all shattered in an instant.

            "Zemir," Shinoda bellowed. "You will return to the underworld as temporary ruler of the realm. But when Mehélia has the child, you will be stripped of your godly powers and forever reside as one of them. You will no longer be the god of the underworld, but a soul cursed to wander those he despised for eternity. Your child, when of age, will take your place as ruler of the underworld. 

            "For your wife, she is to remain the goddess of air under the careful watch of Nah'Zhul. She is to suffer in silent and solitude. 

            As I am the morning and evening star, as I say is so. Farewell, Zemir."

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            A shaking hand, covered with the blood of torture and silt, weakly raised to the air, begging to be grasped by a savior. Its owner gasped for air among the deadly toxins surrounding him. All around the vast wasteland lay thousands of bodies of various races, all screaming to be released from their torment.

            Zemir stood watch over his realm, the heavy shackles keeping him low to the ground next to the souls unfortunate enough to be damned to the underworld. He was back to where he had always been, a captive of his own realm. And before long — when his heir would be born — he would lay forgotten among those he was alleged to watch over.

The Final Fight: War Of The Gods (Pt. 2 Age Of Gods) by A.M. Molloy

Remember last week when I released Part 1 of The Final Fight: War Of The Gods? Great! Because I’m here to satisfy your curiosity with part two, Age of Gods.
Go forth and enjoy reading!~
PS: I am aware of the story and writing flaws. This was original written years ago. 

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                        Age of Gods

 

Though the ground glistened like rain had fallen, the liquid that shone wasn't clear, but red. The suffering souls of children screamed in pain, clutching their grievous wounds as orbs of fire rained from the sky into the never ending battle. The sun beat down on them furiously as the heat wave continued, unaffected at such chaos. The people of Spira screamed until they could no more, until they rested into nothingness. The source of their chaos hovered proudly in the skies as he watched his fellow gods send terror onto the ground below. 

            Zemir flew over the capital city of Bal'Thor, watching as Yava, the goddess of the sun, conjured up an intense heat that ignited Florydia, the goddess of beauty, on fire. The flames grew too unstable for Florydia to contain and she sent them flying in every direction, burning the citizens below. 

            Anuik, god of fire and destruction, attempted to overthrow Keowa, the god of fertility, by erupting all the volcanoes on Spira but in turn burned Keowa to ashes. Zemir smiled to himself at the sight, knowing it was one less god to overthrow.

            His plan for dominating all the gods was in full effect as he watched the battle ensue. Once Zemir had poisoned the High Gods, word soon spread that the position for the new High God was up for the taking and soon every immortal being fought for their rightful spot.  

            With one breath of black fire, Zemir torched the citizens of Bal'Thor. A smile crept upon his face as he watched the people below burn. He flew down and landed next to a dying young boy whose hand reached out for a savior. Zemir flicked his powerful tail and ended the child's life.

            "Does no one dare oppose me?" challenged Zemir. 

            "I shall," came a voice.

            "Rarity?" Zemir laughed. "Of all the gods, you are the last one I'd expect to see fighting. Tell me this, Lady Rarity, do you wish to rule, such as I, or is it too unharmonious for you to bear?"

            "I've no interest in fighting, Lord Zemir… You know that as well as I," Rarity said meekly. She fidgeted with the fabric of her dress. "But… I cannot let you continue disrupting the balance of harmony. It will… it will only end in vain." 

            "Ha! You wish to converse me to death? Is that so? I'm afraid I've no interest in such matters. My wife is with child, you see. I must think of my child's future and I do not want him to be born in the blasted underworld."

            "F-forgive me, my Lord," Rarity stammered. "I do what I must… to keep the harmony of this planet in balance."

            With a few choice words of magic, Rarity unleashed a spell that trapped Zemir's legs in place. 

            "What trickery is this?" yelled Zemir. 

            He struggled with all his might to budge from his spot but he remained fixed. 

            "I beg of you to tell me, my Lord. How… What did you do to the High Gods?"

            Zemir was not going to let the puny goddess of harmony stop him on his quest. How dare she attempt to stop him on this glorious day, where all would suffer under his hands. How dare she believe she could come close to his power and wonder. Yet for all his struggling, he could not move. But her magic could be broken and he knew what he had to do.

            His upper lip curling, and muscles twitching, Zemir bellowed out the sound of thunder, raising his fists to the air. Rarity cowered to the ground, her hands covering her ears.

            Out of desperation, Zemir took hold of his legs, and with all his strength, ripped them from his body. At last, he was free. Rarity was already on the defense, muttering another spell while Zemir's legs were mending themselves.

            The dark god charged at Rarity with top speed, impaling her with his horns. She clutched onto them with bloodied hands and attempted to pull herself free. Zemir shook his head free of Rarity and she fell motionless on the ground.

            "I will send a pestilence and plague upon the gods and mortals," Zemir proclaimed loudly to The Heavens. "I will send the thunder from the sky and the fire raining down upon the land below, with hail of burning ice on every field, village, and continent. May it be known I will reign terror such as the world has never seen. 

            Never mind how high the cost may grow. This will still be so. I will never let the High Gods rise from their slumber and in turn, I shall gain power and become the new High God of Spira. All those who would oppose me will suffer my wrath."

            Zemir's steady heart suddenly beat louder and a writhing pain was felt in his chest. He clutched his breast and gasped for air. His vision blurred. Soon, he fell to the ground, wondering what had happened.
            When he awoke, he found himself chained in a dark and unknown location. His eyes darted around the room for a clue as to his whereabouts. 

            A being clothed in armor of pure light energy came into view.

            "Zemir, this madness has to end," the being said. "Poisoning the High Gods and trying to take their place as your own? You dare commit such an act when it was they who made all of creation? They who had created you!"

            "Come forth and face me, Nah'Zhul, you coward!" said Zemir.

            Nah'Zhul placed his hand on the hilt of his sword. "With you away from the heat of battle, the other gods will surely cease this war. We are sworn to protect the mortals but our fighting has only caused them suffering."

            "What do I care if a few mortals die in the process of victory. I want a world where I can do as I please and not abide by the rules of Shinoda. He has gone astray in his ways. The mortals I will rule over will be worthy of my praise. I do not care for the weak, Lord Nah'Zhul. I've only place for the strong in my world."

            "Is that why you've lead all the gods on this rampage with you?" Nah'Zhul questioned. He sighed. "Then you are a fool. There will be nothing for you to rule if you continue down this path."

            A deep cackle emerged from Zemir's throat. "Don't you see? I've already won."

            "You are bound in shackles, your legs torn from your body. I see not how—"

            Nah'Zhul's hands rushed to his throat as he gasped for air. "I— ah… gack—"

            From Nah'Zhul's mouth came a wisp of wind. He choked as the air escaped his lungs. When there was no more air left to take, Nah'Zhul fell to the ground, lifeless.

            "My love," Zemir said as he watched his wife finished her work.

            Picking up Nah'Zhul's sword, she swung at Zemir's chains and released him from his prison.

            "Go my love. The battle is almost over. With so few deities remaining, you may now have the power to become the new High God of Spira."

            She was right. He could feel the power of the fallen gods flow through his veins. For it was once written that if a god should die, their power would be divided among the remaining deities. It was the one good rule Shinoda had written.